Writing Better Emails

Period Four

Hello,

I believe that having a sloth as our class pet is a bad idea. Here is
why, one having a giant animal sitting in the cornered our class room
would make work really hard because everyone would just be looking at
the sloth not focusing on there work. Two I do not think the school
would be to happy knowing there is a unattended sloth when no one is
watching it at there school. It could cause a lot of damage. Thank you
for your consideration on my ideas for our class pet.

Sincerely,

Natty Holmes

Ms.Rohner,
Hello! How are you? I am writing you because I think that getting a
new class pet would be a great idea, especially a class sloth. The
sloth wouldn't be a distraction to students and would be very low
maintenance. We could also build a habitat for it in the corner of the
room; like the sloths own mini rainforest! I think getting a pet sloth
would teach us all about responsibility and could be a great learning
experience. I hope you consider getting a pet sloth, or maybe another
furry friend?

                               From,

                                       Celeste Kilgore

Ms. Rohner,

I am all for this fantastic idea, it's a very low maintenance pet.
They are quiet, and will most likely  not attack us during class. But
are you considering a 2 or 3 toed sloth? Because if your considering a
three toed sloth, I must warn you, they can be quite noisy. Their
screech could be a bit disruptive!

Thank you,
Brady Eavenson

Dear Ms Rohner,

I think that our class should get a class sloth. We have been
really responsible this year so I think that we should get one.
Everyone could take care of him/her and it would be really cool. Maybe
we could all put money in to get him/her so you don't have to pay all
the cash. I don't think he would be a distraction to the class because
we will focus more. If we don't then we could just take him or her
back. This is why I think that we should get a class sloth.

Thanks, Tom Higgins

Dear Ms. Rohner, 

I think that you shouldn't get a sloth for class pet. I would really love to have a sloth for class pet, but it would be a distraction in class, and some people are already easily distracted. Another reason why we shouldn't get a sloth for class pet is we would all fight over getting to bring it home. Finally, we would have to buy a cage and food for it. That is why I think that we shouldn't get a sloth for a class pet, even though I want to have a sloth for class pet it would be to much of a distraction.

Sincerely, 

Jade 

Hi I am emailing to talk about the amount of fun that is going in
school. Many kids are performing poorly because no one is having fun.
So I think that we should play more games like silent ball and dodge
ball so on and so forth. I hope you take this into mind because I have
thoroughly looked at my research and think this is the best plausible
answer to the problem.

Thank you for your time,
Nick School AKA Benedict Cumberpatch

Hi Ms. Rohner,

This is Anna!  I wanted to talk to you about getting a sloth for a
class pet.  I don't think this would be a good idea.  It would be a
distraction during class.  It would be all over everything.  Also, I
think the sloth would need more space than the classroom has.  It
would make the classroom a mess! I just wanted you to know how I felt
about this.

Thanks!

Anna

Dear Ms.Rohner,

I have noticed on daily basis the days have been slurring together,
what I mean is days have began to get dull so I put a classroom pet
into consideration. As I was pondering the idea I realized that this
couldn't happen without your permission, the idea just came to me
today after school and I wanted to contact as soon as possible.

Best regards,
Alden Siepert